I've always wanted to see a comic with your characters and here it is! It's truly amazing, I like your rough lines, colors and facial expressions~ I would like to say more, but I'm not so good at english either
The art cancels out any grammar flaws! Amazing! if there is one area, when he says "Of course make a fire" it could be "Make a fire, of course". ^-^ barely noticable~ But really, your art is amazing!!!!!